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write an essay how you meet a special person

On December 6, Srikanth and his parents came to our house for a face-to-face conversation. My family welcomed them politely. Two family members introduced each other. Meanwhile, Mom takes the snack plates and asks them to serve. I did as my mother told me. After a few minutes, I served everyone tea. I was surprised when I offered him tea because he thanked me with a charming smile. My heart was thrilled.
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 others chit in the hall, his uncle asked my mother to give him space to talk to each other. I and Srikanth went to the bedroom
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 my uncle brought a chair for him.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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