large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is opinion on this? do you think this is good or bad change?

There is no denying the fact that the Small shopping takes the Place of the large shopping.

While

it is a commonly held belief malls are closing the big shops and replacing them with smaller stores, there is

also

an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider

that is

a negative change. First of all, the tiny stories couldn't have changed to open in the centre, but if

this

system has been important,

then

they will give those opportunities to become great shops,

in other words

, anything beginning with new skills,but there are many opponents, so nobody will give them chance to improve their self.

For example

, there is a businessman called Ahmed, who started a small company,

Although

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his own business

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society didn't look at him, but after time the boss of Salam Mall, took his hands, and awarded him a huge place, so

this

has been a great opportunity, so now he one of the effective man in the world,

however

, we should expect the beginner shoppes. Another point to consider, the new system will be solid, and heavy for ancient People, who are old businesses, because,

this

role takes off their skills, and after time they will back down. If we closed the big stories, it is

also

possible to say that, difficult for the smallest shop too,because if we replaced the smallest

then

the biggest,

such

as we are telling them, if they become famous and wealthy, we will talk their stores. in conclusion, despite having different views, I strongly believe that,

while

we want to improve and encourage our community to be successful, we should think about these advantages and disadvantages.