Your friend helped you prepare for an exam, and you have passed it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Thank your friend. Explain how your friend’s help was useful to pass the exam. Arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon. Begin your letter as follows: Dear _____,

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Dear Anna, I want to express thanks for your help. In general, I am very happy you decided to explain to me all the hard subjects that I did not understand.
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, I want to tell you that I passed my chemistry exam with the highest mark. These results are because of you. When I saw the test, I was surprised that I knew how to do every exercise.
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, all the tips that you gave me were more than enough for me to resolve the
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, thank you for teaching me how to read chemistry elements, it was a great skill that I used for one of the questions. I am sorry that I am writing you a letter, so let’s meet up soon to tell you face-to-face what I feel and how grateful I am. I think a good coffee and a piece of cake will be a little pay for your effort to teach me. You can tell me if next Friday is good for our meeting. See you soon. Warm regards, Daria

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Consider adding more specific examples of how your friend's help directly impacted your understanding of the subject matter.
coherence and cohesion
Try to enhance the flow between the paragraphs to improve the overall logical structure, perhaps by using more linking phrases.
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You maintained a warm and friendly tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for your relationship with your friend.
coherence and cohesion
Your closing invitation to meet up is a nice touch, making the letter feel personal and inviting.
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