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In many countries plastic bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollution in oceans and on land; therefore they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

#countries #plastic #bags #source #rubbish #pollution #oceans #land
In our world, the first point of trash is
plastic
bags
. For the
plastic
bags
, every day we pollute our land
as well as
 our oceans. Most industries were outlawed
as a result
 of the pollution.
This
 essay will explain why we disagree with
this
 statement. In my opinion, why are we feeling
worst
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worse
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 about the pollution from
plastic
bags
? The reason is that it can't
desolve
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dissolve
 with soil easily and needs a very long time to
desolve
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dissolve
resolve
 with soil and water.
This
 chemical bonding is different from other materials. In our daily lives, we use it for many kinds of work.
This
 is portable, easy to carry from one place to another, and cost-effective.
For
this
 reason,
this
 item is becoming more and more demanded for daily household work. But after using, we are not keeping to any required place for reusing and replacing,
whereas
 we are throwing to our
houseland
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homeland
house land
.
For example
, when we are going to a shopping mall to take some of the required materials, the shopkeeper gives us a
plastic
 bag to carry. After using it, we are going to throw it to dust, and
this
 trash is kept in a landside area and mixed with soil, but they have not mixed with it and are not
desolving
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dissolving
resolving
 with it.   My other point of view is that we need to make some legislation for producing these
plastic
bags
 so that they will be restricted from being used. If you have not followed any rules,
then
 give them punishment for
further
 haggling. They will be more conscious of the environment and need to make conservation work for
this
 desert in the future. It is not possible to ensure that
this
 is not used
while
 distracted because social communication needs to develop, which will happen after the climate changes.
For example
, the amount of
plastic
 used on a daily basis is increasing without regard for the need to degrade.
than
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then
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 it will be
diccrises
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describes
.  In
conclution
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conclusion
,
plastic
used
Verb problem
is
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 not
godd
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good
 for
our
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the
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 next generation if we
want
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towant
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 give
tham
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them
good
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a good
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 environment. So need to focus
for
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on
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 reusing and reprocessing and give
awerness
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awareness
 program for all
to
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about
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 using
the
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apply
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plastic
bags
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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