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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

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It has been said that
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 is the best
time
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 in human history for living. I strongly agree with
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 statement because technological advancements have made our
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life
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 a lot easier than ever before. In
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 essay, I will examine in detail the blessing of
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 that proves that we are living in the best
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.
Apart from
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this
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, I will suggest another period of
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 that would be interesting to live in.
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 has made the way of communication a lot easier, meaning that
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 are now connected with each other regardless of national boundaries.
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, the internet and social media allow
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 to make voice and video calls from anywhere in the world.
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, it is needless to say that the standard of living of
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 is better now. Innovative
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 like washing machines, microwaves, refrigerators, and many other home appliances have made
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's lives comfortable.
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,
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 it is true that we are living a happier
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 now with the help of
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, I acknowledge that the
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 before industrial revolution could be very interesting.
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 the unavailability of technological marvels,
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 was very simple and straightforward.
People
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 used to visit each other very often as there were no communication devices like smartphones.
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, there was less traffic congestion and pollution allowing
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 to live happily. In conclusion, technological advancements have made communication and the standard of living better we can say that we are living in the best
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 in human history.
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, it is undeniable that
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 lived happily before the Industrial Revolution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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