You read in a newspaper that a company is going to renovate some school buildings in your local area that are in a poor condition. You would like to offer your help. Write a letter to the charity paying for the renovation.In your letter ● explain why you want to help with the renovations ● suggest what you can do to help ● say when you are available to start work

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter in regard to the renovation of
school
buildings
in Kent. I read news in Daily Tribune dated 23 November 2021 about facelift work in
school
buildings
in Kent. I want to be part of
this
initiative. I would like to participate in the upgrade of the
school
building. As I had studied in one of the
school
buildings
which you planned to renovate.
This
is a great opportunity to show gratitude to my academy building.
Furthermore
, I work as an electrician in a German company . I can help in laying new electricity connections in the building and make sure they work well. I can
also
help in painting the walls of
buildings
. I can start working from next week from 21 December on a daily basis for 5 hours in the evening from 6 to 10pm for the entire renovation duration. I Look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John mike
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