You read in a newspaper that a company is going to renovate some school buildings in your local area that are in a poor condition. You would like to offer your help. Write a letter to the charity paying for the renovation.In your letter ● explain why you want to help with the renovations ● suggest what you can do to help ● say when you are available to start work

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter in regard to
renovation
of
school
buildings in
kent
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. I read news in daily tribune dated 23
november2021
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November 2021
about
renovation
work in
school
buidlings
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buildings
in
kent
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Kent
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. I want to be part of
this
initiative.
i
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I
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would like to participate in
renovation
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the renovation
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of
school
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the school
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building. As I had studied in one of the
school
biliding
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building
which you planned to renovate.
This
is
great
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a great
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oppurnity
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opportunity
to show
grattitude
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gratitude
to my
school
building.
Furthermore
, I work as
electrician
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an electrician
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in
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the german
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german
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company .
i
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can help in laying new electricity connection in building and
makesure
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make sure
they
works
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well. I can
also
help in painting the walls of buildings
too
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apply
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. I can start working from next week from 21
december
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on
daily
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a daily
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basis for 5 hours in
evening
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the evening
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from 6 to 10pm for
entire
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the entire
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renovation
duration. I Look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John mike
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