The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of norbiton, and planned future development of the site

The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of norbiton, and planned future development of the site
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The given maps demonstrate the changes in the Norbiton industrial area in the
future
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compared with the now.
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,
it is clear that
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future
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development will facilitate residents in terms of hospitals, play areas for children, and shops. replace factories with houses.
To begin
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with, at present, the Norbiton industrial area is a roundabout which is surrounded by factories which will be replaced with housing areas.
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, another noticeable change is that there will be a bridge over a river and
one
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housing society built across it where was farmland situated.
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, the
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development will have two roundabouts
instead
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of
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in the past.
One
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will remain at the same place and the second
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just in front of the previous
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in the south direction.
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, the more striking renovation will be building the playground, school, shops and medical centre for the residents.
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farmland will be replaced from the north to the corner of the northeast side.
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, the town will be in the same place in the
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, in the west.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words future, one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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