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in many contries around the world , rural peple are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you thick this is a positive or negative developmet?

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There has been controversy about whether rural people should stay in their places or move to the cities.
Additionally
, a significant decrease in the population of the countryside will happen. From my perspective, I think
this
 transformation will bring negative effects and its demerits outweigh its merits. In
this
 ,essay I will discuss the reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, on the one hand, almost all of the rural citizens move their whole lives to the capital cities to achieve a better and more convenient lifestyle not only for themselves but
also
 to prepare a rich future for their children.
Furthermore
, One of the main reasons for migration to the cityside is the lack of facilities
as well as
 equipped hospitals, special schools and welfare areas leads to a significant fall in the population of villages and the countryside.
For instance
, it is obvious that the Countryside does not have a proper medical centre for treatment and
this
 will result in using transportation
such
 as taxis or buses for going to the city centre and it costs a lot and
also
 expertise hospitals do not accept village insurance and
also
this
 problem requires a lot of budgets.
On the other hand
, if individuals stay in their local neighborhood causes a lot of benefits for the country. In other words, overpopulation, more crowded roads and climate change are the most important occurrences that will be caused.
In addition
, the capital metropolis is already crowded and full of citizens, as a ,result increase in the number of buildings and cars,
whereas
, decline the green sites
such
 as parks.
For example
, one of the spread concerns is climate change
as well as
 the change in the thickness of the ozone layer,
hence
, causing damage to
this
 layer by rising temperature. In conclusion, from my point of view, I believe the advent of overcrowding downtown transformed our world in a negative development. Meanwhile, I recommend the government to provide the same facilities as urban in the backcountry to prevent
this
 happening.
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