Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In the letter .give details of how you and your friends use the center .explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community .describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes. write 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

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is Islam Mohamed, one of your city residents. I am writing

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letter regarding the sports and leisure centre which is located

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downtown, and you are going to close it.

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, I would like to tell you that my friends and I use

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center

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on a regular basis.

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, the majority of young people in my

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have been going to

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facility for a long time to exercise.

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, as sport is one of the most crucial issues in our lives, we

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keen on exercising to protect our health.

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, many families go

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there at weekends to have

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quality time in order to be ready for the rest of the week.

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, I would be grateful if you could try to think about the feelings of a plethora of teenagers, children, and adults after closing

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place. Honestly, if you closed the centre, it would be a shock for everyone, and

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may lead to detrimental impacts on the community. I look forward to hearing

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matter is greatly appreciated. Faithfully yours, Islam Mohamed

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