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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

#spread #english #language
It is clearly seen that
English
 has spread rapidly as a main global
language
 all over the globe with its detrimental effect on the existence of the local languages. I do agree with
this
 issue since it might eradicate the identity of a nation
as well as
 its pride. On the one hand, regarding globalisation people are encouraged to have the ability to speak in
English
, especially in developed
country
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countries
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. As a matter of fact, people from non-
English
language
country
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countries
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 persuade their students to learn
English
 and even provide it in the school curriculum as mandatory.
For instance
, in my
country
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 even kindergarten students are taught to learn
English
.
Thus
, some of them could talk in their national
language
 whilst it might be resulted in the diminishing of local
language
 users.
On the other hand
, perhaps those who speak
English
 fluently and work in a giant company in some developed countries have a tendency to feel awkward using their own mother tongue. Surprisingly, they do not even want to acknowledge their roots and pretend to be a real citizen of
English spoken
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country
.
This
 is how focusing
English
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 as the main
language
 of all nations could create those kinds of attitudes.
To conclude
, even if having a global
language
 is essential in
this
 cutting-edge era it
also
 has a negative side which slowly people might forget to use their original
language
.
Therefore
, we still need to encourage each
country
 to heritage local
language
 especially youngsters in order to boost their sense of nationality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • lingua franca
  • communication
  • employment opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural exchange
  • knowledge sharing
  • education
  • travel
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural imperialism
  • linguistic imperialism
  • colonization
  • identity
  • language preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • mutual understanding
  • intercultural relationships
  • linguistic barriers
  • disadvantaged communities
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