When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Nowadays, there are a lot of
people
who assess others at the moment of the first meeting. In Use synonyms
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is a bad idea to judge Linking Words
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way and build our relationships based on the first-moment evaluation.
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Firstly
, individuals try to form their opinion very quickly about a Linking Words
person
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However
, it misleads these judgemental individuals and Linking Words
according to
research, the probability of a mistake is 85%. Linking Words
Secondly
, Linking Words
such
behaviour leads to a reduction of the social environment. Linking Words
For example
, some introverts are quite shy to open up with strangers during their initial meetings as they cannot express themselves openly and talk less. The Linking Words
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introverted Linking Words
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is a little bit rude. In the future, Use synonyms
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will be avoided. Use synonyms
Thus
, it leads to losing an opportunity to have a good friend.
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Finally
, Linking Words
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tendency can give a bad reputation to a judgmental Linking Words
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As a consequence
, they can make it way harder to be friends with someone later. Linking Words
For instance
, students usually agree that it is difficult to be friendly towards someone who chooses a friend group too soon in the early semester because they feel that these individuals unfairly relate to other Linking Words
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On the contrary
, it would be positive for you to make time to get to know someone because Linking Words
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individual can be well-developed and can help you to raise as a Linking Words
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To conclude
, the quick judgement of other Linking Words
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is a highly unlikely behaviour pattern. Fast assessment can be wrong and, in many cases, leads to a decrease in society's environment. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it may have unpleasant consequences for a judgmental Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
Expand your introduction with a clearer thesis statement that indicates the reasons why you believe quick judgments are negative, and ensure that your conclusion summarizes these points effectively.
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