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The maps show two different underground tunnel systems for cars in two Australian cites.

The maps show two different underground tunnel systems for cars in two Australian cites.
The
two
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 maps compared
between
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apply
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two
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tunnel
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 systems for vehicles in
two
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 different
cites
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cities
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 in Australia built in
two
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 different
century
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centuries
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. As we can see from the information given,
that
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there
are
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is
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 six main
information
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pieces of information
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 about the
tunnel
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, which are (year of structure, cost, place, high,
long
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length
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 and wide).
Firstly
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, the first map shows that the
tunnel
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built
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was built
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 from 1986 to 1998, which means
they
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it
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 took 12 years to
built
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build
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this
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tunnel
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under water
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underwater
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, and it cost 555 million dollars. The
tunnel
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high
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is high
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1.5
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at 1.5
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 meters, and is 2.2 kilometers long,
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moreover
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,moreover
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 it has
two
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 ways for
two
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 cars
each
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on each
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 side. The second map illustrates that the
tunnel
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built
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was built
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 between 2002 and 2006,
thats
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that
that's
 means they finished in four years.
In contrast
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, it cost more than 1 billion dollars.
This
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tunnel
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 was built under the city with 2.5 meters high,
and
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3.6 kilometers long, and
more wide
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wider
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 than the other
tunnel
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 we mentioned before.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, tunnel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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