The pictures below show how tomatoe ketchup is made
The pictures highlight the steps involved in producing sauce. There are fifteen stages in the diagram, from picking tomatoes to enjoying a hamburger and fries with
ketchup
.
The first step is
that tomatoes are picked and put in a basket by the farmer, and then
they are sorted suitable
and inappropriate tomatoes. After which, vegetables are sent to the factory. Once Change preposition
into suitable
being
removed from the stalk, seeds and peel, Unnecessary verb
apply
they
are Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
sent to the container in order to be cashed. After crashing, sugar, vinegar and salt are added to the ketchup
. Following
this
, the whole mixture is boiled. When ketchup
has been left out for two hours, the bottle is poured by it. The next step is
that the bottles are labelled. After being checked for good quality, it is sorted into boxes, in order to be delivered to the supermarket. Finally
, ketchup
can be eaten with hamburgers and fries.Submitted by aysulu20152 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite