The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart provides information about the quantity of money that kids fund who were in the USA gave and took in 2016.
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, we noticed from the chart that the total amount of the Revenue Sources was higher than the Expenditures. First of all, we begin with the first pie of the Revenue Sources. We recognise that we have six different sections and the top one is Donated Food with a percentage of 86.6%.
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, we continue with the section that has
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second place and it is called Community Contributions with a proportion of 10.4%. The section that has third place is the program revenue with a statistic
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of 2.2%. In the end, we have the
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three sections with the lowest amount per cent of money and they are the Investment Income , Government Grants and the Other Incomes with approximately the same numbers 0.2% , 0.2% and 0.4%.
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, we move forward with the second pie with the name Expenditures. It is obvious that the section with the highest percentage is program services with a
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of 95.8%.
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, now we have less
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of sections and it is three. Basically, the other two types are Fundraising above Management and General in second place with the
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of per cents at 2.6% and 1.6%, respectively.
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