Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how

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It is essential for people to learn

English

school

, compared to learning the local

language

This

essay strongly agrees with the following statement and will be discussed

further

as follows. The

language

that is

currently being used worldwide is

English

, and many countries already admit that

English

is an international

language

. Since

school

is supposed to give their student useful things that will help them succeed in the future, learning the

English

language

is one of the things. Students that have been taught

English

delicately since elementary

school

, will have more proficiency in speaking

English

and will likely be at ease if they want to work or even just have a holiday in a different country, than students that have not learnt

English

at their

school

Nevertheless

, learning local languages is

also

important since it is our identity and to help it so it won’t die out. But, in some regions, the children already learnt their local languages from their environment and family.

This

usually occurs in urban countries, and, usually their environment doesn’t teach them the

English

language

For instance

, in Bandung children commonly use their local

language

while

playing with their friends and

while

just communicating with their families. In conclusion, learning

English

school

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show examples

can

also

help children to prepare for their future, since

English

language

is an international

language

that has been used worldwide. It is more important to learn

English

school

because in some regions, havechildren already been taught their local languages from their environment and they do not need to be taught about it at

school

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

264 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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