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Some people believe that a college or university education should be aviable to all students. Others believe that higher education should be aviable only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.

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It is argued that
education
 is not exclusivity and
everona
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everyone
 should take advantage of it , independent of their social status and fortune.
This
 essay agrees with that opinion because of the benefits of
education
. The essay will first look at
benefits
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 that learning brings to
health
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the health
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 sector
then
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 discuss
about
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family well-being
with
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it
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apply
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.
Education
 should not only be limited to strict academic
pursuit
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 and should
also
 develop vitality. If
education
 is
aviable
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available
 for everyone , among poor people enlightening doctors can be discovered. Educational healthcare
profetionals
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professionals
 mean healthier
individual
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.
Although
 some
illnesses’s
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 can not be cured yet ,
however
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 it improves treatment methods. In financially
needed
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 countries because of
lack
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a lack
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 of
education
, people suffer from a lot of illnesses.
According to
 UNICEF relating prospering learning , in three decades 63% of health problems are solved and individual’s average lifetime increased. Family prosperity
also
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 on
education
, as educated individual tends to make better parenting decision and provide
more
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 stable home environment. They know how to treat family
mambers
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members
especially
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 their children.
While educated
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individual
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individuals
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 better provide
their
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 family’s needs
also
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and also
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he
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or
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she
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can
easly
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easily
 help their children with their lessons. As stated by
Ministry
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the Ministry
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 of
Education
 , Children
who
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 parents are
well educated
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 are
also
 good
in
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 their lessons. In summary, it is essential to emphasize that
education
 is not a luxury but rather a fundamental right and a valuable resource that should be accessible to all. We should all recognize its benefits and strive to acquire knowledge and skills to make a positive impact on our world.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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