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Nowadays, studying online is increasingly popular. Each year a large number of pupils opt to study digitally
instead
 of the traditional classroom style.
This
 essay will discuss the main course and how to it improve. On the one hand, most teenagers find online
classes
 much easier than going to university. As it is flexible and
students
 can attend the lectures if they are not available in the city.
For example
, Indian
students
 can choose any university in the UK and enrol for online
classes
 and are not required to travel to other countries.
Furthermore
, digital
classes
 are more affordable as compared to the
campus
.
Such
 as the student can save money on travelling, and school uniform it is convenient for student who can not pay for their schooling. One of my classmates took some courses online and it cost him almost half of the price compared to physical
classes
.
On the other hand
, the government needs to cut down the school hours so,
students
 will have time for their activities. These changes will bring the pupils back to the
campus
.
Moreover
, universities should decrease their fees
as a result
 more and more parents can afford which will bring huge changes in the student
campus
.
To sum up
, most
students
 select online
classes
due to
 flexibility and financial conditions. and the
campus
 needs to work on
this
 factor to bring more teenagers to the universities.
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