You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

Dear Pat, Hope you doing well. Thank you for everything you
done for
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last
weekend at your
home
. The way you and your family
treated
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is really fascinating. I felt like my
home
when I was spending time with your family. I returned
home
around 8.00 p.m. yesterday. I found that
,
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I
forgot
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my
coat
in your
home
when I was leaving there. As I remember , I kept my
coat
near the main door. My
coat
is
a
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black colour
one
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and there were some items
on
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my
coat
pockets. There was my BRP card on
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left hand
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side pocket.
Also
one of
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on
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the same pocket. There were
pair
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of
sunglass
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and
the
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watch on the right side pocket. I am planning to collect my
coat
from your house
of
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next Sunday. But the issue is
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card. Can you send me the card through a
currier
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service
please
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.
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Thank you. Kind regards Jhon
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