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The bar chart below shows the production of the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the production of the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart indicates the
oil
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 production in three
Non
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OPEC
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,
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, and other
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regions
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 over 40
years
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 between 1980 and 2020.
Overall
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, the
oil
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 supplies by
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non-OPEC
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OPEC
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 companies have significantly increased throughout the period.
On the other hand
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, the grease production of
OPEC
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regions
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 has drastically decreased between 2010 and 2020.
According to
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 the figure, the total
oil
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 generation remarkably increased during 10
years
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 from 2000 to 2010.
In addition
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, the share of the world's
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 for different
regions
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 has experienced widespread changes over 40
years
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. As can be seen from the chart, the
OPEC
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 Middle East companies approximately produced three-fourths of all
oil
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 productions over 20
years
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 from 1980 to 2000. In the next 10
years
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, the non-
OPEC
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 and other
OPEC
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regions
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 improved their generations and they produced about 70 per cent of
oil
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 derivatives altogether.
Furthermore
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, in the final 10
years
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, non-
OPEC
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oil
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 producers could overtake other companies and own the largest share of
oil
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 products from 2010 to 2020.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, opec, regions, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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