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The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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As can be clearly seen from the table the data about the three nations with their maximum population.
Overall
, Among these 3 ,countries
China
 is considered the highest number of citizens and land range but the USA has the lowest number of citizens.
To begin
, The world's 3 dominating countries contain half of the globe's Residents
China
 is the most populated with 1.415 billion individuals. Though the land space is almost equal between
China
 and the USA but Population is one-fifth.
Moreover
, the growth rate
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 doubled in America compared to
China
whereas
 India showed the maximum growth rate after 2017 at 1.11% and residents are the second highest in the world.
In addition
, most Americans lived in the Urban area which consisted of 83%,
as well as
 the Chinese 58% and Indians 32%.
Additionally
, the Density is higher in India 455 individuals per square kilometer compared to other two's
China
 and the USA number 151 and 36, respectively.
To Sum up
, Among these ,countries the population, growth rate and density depend on the area
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 and
also
 gives the percentage of city-lived people.
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