You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: •Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. • State what your skills and experience are. • Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know about the recent posting I saw on
Cultural
Expeditions LinkedIn webpage, in regards to the senior nurse openings for the foreign voluntary work trips.
It will be my honorCorrect article usage
the Cultural
,
If I am given Remove the comma
apply
this
wonderful opportunity as I have always been in search to pay back to different communities and societies in numerous ways, especially the under-developed nations. Having seen such
an incident firsthand in my family, I want to prevent any additional cases in the world from
deadly and long-lasting diseases like polio and blood cancer.
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of
Having
worked as a registered Senior nurse in California at a leading government hospital for over 15 years, with over 10 years Wrong verb form
I have
experience
in specialized and urgent care, Change preposition
of experience
while
the remaining in general care and vaccination. I believe with
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that
such
hands-on experience, in the long-run
, will prove Correct your spelling
long run
it
to be very valuable in giving back to the people and more importantly in educating them Correct pronoun usage
apply
from
not Change preposition
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getting
involved in those bad Change the verb form
to get
healty
eating habits.
Given the opportunity, I would like to volunteer in any of the African Correct your spelling
healthy
health
country
, as they are the most underserved people in the matter of healthcare. I would like to start with a Change to a plural noun
countries
one month
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one-month
volunteership
with Correct your spelling
volunteers
possibility
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the possibility
for
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of
extension
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an extension
,
and would be great if it happens to fall in the month of December as I have Remove the comma
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long
Christmas vacation.
Yours Sincerely,
Thanks
HarshCorrect article usage
a long
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