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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles others think there are other better ways. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

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These days,
traffic
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 is one of the growing concerns because of the growing population and the travel needs. Many
people
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 believe that
vehicles
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' maximum speed limit must be reduced to improve
road
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safety
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,
whereas
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 others claim that there are many other ways to tackle the issue. In my opinion, I believe that issuing penalties or suspending the driver's license, creating more
road
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 lanes and increasing
traffic
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 signals would help in improving
road
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safety
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.
This
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 essay will discuss both the views and my opinion with supporting evidence. On the one hand,
people
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 believe that reducing the maximum speed
limits
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 on
vehicles
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 is the best way to improve
road
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safety
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,
In other words
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, if cars and buses could follow speed
limits
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 based on
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such
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 as school
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, highway
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 or residential
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, we can minimize the impacts
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 accidents.
For instance
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, In Canada, the government has enforced a speed limitation rule near colleges and schools,
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, on residential areas and, highways which will allow
people
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 to drive
according to
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 the limit.
Furthermore
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,
such
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limits
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 will help
people
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 to drive and control their
vehicles
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 even during difficult circumstances.
On the other hand
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, I believe that there are many other ways to tackle the issue and improve
safety
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.
Firstly
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, the government can issue high penalties if they are overspeeding or even they could suspend their license to create a threat among
people
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.
Secondly
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, roads should have separate lanes for pedestrians, four wheelers and heavy
vehicles
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.
This
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 method will help in organising the travel,
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, will not cause much difficulty for
people
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 during the commute.
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, deploying frequent
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 signals will stop
vehicles
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 frequently and help them maintain their speed
limits
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.
To conclude
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,
although
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 reducing the maximum speed
limits
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 possibly enhances
safety
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, I believe that other measures like implementing fines or cancelling the license, effective
road
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 lanes and increasing
traffic
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 signals are much more effective in improving
road
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safety
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.
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