Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent to you agree with this? How do you think space explonation will change in the future?

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exploration is mostly related to how advanced a country is in terms of the

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technologies that they have. I personally agree with

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notion because they want to attract other countries to see their new invention of technology. The reason why I agree with these issues is because as a nation, they

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have a natural tendency to become widely known. As a matter of fact,

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discovering

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space

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they

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have

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main aim to expose each of their

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technology and even compete

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other countries. Take

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for

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example, explore

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several times

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a year and exaggerate their reports in the media to seek people's attention and gain popularity.

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, even if it takes a long period of time to prove and

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much money to support them, they still invest in

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exploration to keep up their pride. Having said that, in the

future

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i

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believe that wealthy people will put their sight on

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invention. It might be driven by

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sense of curiosity since humans have a natural tendency to go beyond their

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.

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, a well-known millionaire, Elon Musk sent his car into

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and probably has other ideas for

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exploration which could allow more people

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it as having leisure time on earth.

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, in order to boost their pride, developed countries mostly explore other spaces to boost their pride.

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it is undeniable that in the future it might be a common thing for them to travel to other horizons using the means of sophisticated transportation that they have.