Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent to you agree with this? How do you think space explonation will change in the future?
It is argued that
space
exploration is mostly related to how advanced a country is in terms of the state of the art of
technologies that they have. I personally agree with Correct your spelling
state-of-the-art
this
notion because they want to attract other countries to see their new invention of technology.
The reason why I agree with these issues is because as a nation, they also
have a natural tendency to become widely known. As a matter of fact, while
discovering the
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main aim to expose each of their Unnecessary verb
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state of the art
technology and even compete Add a hyphen
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Russia
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space
several times during
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exploration to keep up their pride.
Having said that, in the future
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For instance
, a well-known millionaire, Elon Musk sent his car into space
and probably has other ideas for further
exploration which could allow more people experiencing
it as having leisure time on earth.
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To conclude
, in order to boost their pride, developed countries mostly explore other spaces to boost their pride. Therefore
it is undeniable that in the future it might be a common thing for them to travel to other horizons using the means of sophisticated transportation that they have.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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