The diagram below shows information about student attendance in various schools. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the number of students who attended four different schools in the period from 2001 to 2007. In general, Seven Oaks had the highest presence, but Page Hill scored the opposite in entire years.
First,
Seven Oaks scored the highest student attendance in 2006, with almost one thousand pupils in that year. Therefore
, It also
topped the race of attendance in the entire year between 2001 to 2007. In contrast
, Page Hill always got fewer students than others and in 2001 the school scored the lowest attendance with not exceeding 400 learners.
Lastly
, from 2001 to 2005 Royal Latin always got more learners than Didcot Secondary. Yet, in 2006 Didcot Secondary surpassed incoming pupils attending Royal Latin with more than 600 students for both schools. Moreover
, the gap increased in the following year.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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