The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart illustrates the variation in
production
of three clothes in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Correct article usage
the production
While
suit and dress experienced fluctuation, the variation of coat shows a
upward trend throughout the survey Change the article
an
period
.
The number in production
of suit
experienced a Fix the agreement mistake
suits
period
of high speed
Add a hyphen
high-speed
increasing
until 1995. The Replace the word
increase
production
number reduced sharply from 27 millions
in 1995 to 16 Change to singular
million
millions
in 2005, attaining 18 Change to singular
million
millions
in 2010. Change to singular
million
In addition
, starting from 10 millions
, Change to singular
million
while
experienced
a decline Wrong verb form
experiencing
period
from 1995 to 2000, the production
amout
of dress climbed to 15 Correct your spelling
amount
millions
in 2010 and Change to singular
million
is
the least Wrong verb form
was
prevalant
cloth Correct your spelling
prevalent
at the end
of the survey period
.
In contrast
, the production
number of coat
rose dramatically from 7 Fix the agreement mistake
coats
millions
in 1990 to 27 in 2005. Change to singular
million
However
, the increase speed has slowed down since 2005, reaching 25 millions
in 2010, which is the most popular cloth among these three types in the end.Change to singular
million
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