You have recently started a job in a new company.Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: - Explain why you changed the job - Describe your new job - Tell him/her your other news
Dear Ali,
I have
a great news
as Remove the article
great news
a piece of great news
i
have recently received an updated job proposal from the company in your city. Change the capitalization
I
Trully
speaking, Correct your spelling
Truly
i
have lost faith in it, but Change the capitalization
I
company's
head-hunter contacted me via email and informed Correct article usage
the company's
that
they are still interested in my participation in the project.
Mostly, Correct pronoun usage
me that
i
will have the same duties, Change the capitalization
I
however
my work schedule is much lighter than the current one. Add a comma
,however
Besides
the advanced salary, there is one assistant and a voluntier
in my team, Correct your spelling
volunteer
thus
i
will not be overloaded with Change the capitalization
I
the
Correct article usage
apply
paper work
and no strict Correct your spelling
paperwork
attendancy
time.
I want you to know that Correct your spelling
attendance
i'm
getting Change the capitalization
I'm
maried
in a month or two so be ready to lead the ceremony as I'm going to Correct your spelling
married
assigne
you my Correct your spelling
assign
bestman
. So, please, get an appropriate suit and shave your Correct your spelling
best man
hypster
beard. Just kidding, you are Correct your spelling
hipster
welcomed
in any outfit.
Email me as soon as you can, there are more things to discuss.
Your mate,
GabiReplace the word
welcome
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coherence cohesion
Reorganize the letter to have clear paragraphs that address each topic separately.
coherence cohesion
Include a more appropriate opening and closing for the letter.
task achievement
Expand on the reasons for changing the job and provide more details about the new job.
task achievement
Avoid using informal language and make sure the writing tone is more formal.
grammatical range and accuracy
Review and correct the grammatical errors in the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,