You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter •Introduce yourself • Describe your plans for the party • Invite your neighbor to come

#home #party #noise #neighbor #•introduce #plans

Dear Mr Ali, My name is Ahmed and I just moved to

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building

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a week ago. Currently, I am living in flat number 6 which is beside yours on the same floor.

To begin

with, I would like to express my gratitude about moving here by holding a party with my friends next Friday;

hence

, I am afraid that the noise resulting from it would affect you, so I appreciate your feedback about the best time to hold it, taking into consideration I am planning to have

this

party from 10 PM till 3 AM.

Moreover

, It will be a great party as I am planning to invite a well-known singer

in addition

to some activities like playing cards and video games;

therefore

, please accept my invitation as It will be my pleasure to know you more and introduce you to my friends. By the end, I hope to receive your feedback soon and I hope you can join us. Yours Sincerely, Ahmed Elnahhas

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coherence cohesion

Provide more specific details about the party plans, such as the theme or reason for the celebration.

task achievement

Consider adjusting the time of the party to be more considerate of the neighbor's potential discomfort.

coherence cohesion

Include a more friendly and welcoming greeting and closing.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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