You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter •Introduce yourself • Describe your plans for the party • Invite your neighbor to come

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Dear Mr Ali, My name is Ahmed and I just moved to

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a week ago. Currently, I am living in flat number 6 which is beside yours on the same floor.

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with, I would like to express my gratitude about moving here by holding a party with my friends next Friday;

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, I am afraid that the noise resulting from it would affect you, so I appreciate your feedback about the best time to hold it, taking into consideration I am planning to have

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party from 10 PM till 3 AM.

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, It will be a great party as I am planning to invite a well-known singer

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to some activities like playing cards and video games;

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, please accept my invitation as It will be my pleasure to know you more and introduce you to my friends. By the end, I hope to receive your feedback soon and I hope you can join us. Yours Sincerely, Ahmed Elnahhas

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Provide more specific details about the party plans, such as the theme or reason for the celebration.

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Consider adjusting the time of the party to be more considerate of the neighbor's potential discomfort.

coherence cohesion

Include a more friendly and welcoming greeting and closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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