You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing to you regarding my lost identification card. I missed my ID card yesterday when I was coming on my way to the University, I noticed that it wasn't with me the moment I wanted to enter the University, I faced a real problem from the gate , as well as I had been forbidden from accessing the Library, I couldn't progress in my research. And not only that , to attend my chemistry laboratory I had to bring a permission from the dean, the problem that the permission I had was valid for only 48 hours, until I can get my new identification card. As I need the card in every step in my college, most of my Business is hanging for now , I wouldn't be able to review some references or borrow them from the library, moreover , I have to submit my final research within one week , as the deadline is about to due , every day has a great value to me . Other problem , the missing laboratory classes are very hard to be substituted. For all above reasons ,I want to apply for new card , hopefully, as soon as possible, in order to attend my classes and be able to finish my research in time , as you know the temporal permission would be expired by the end to today , I'm wondering if any official form should be filled . I brought my passport as requested and two passport size photos, if any further documents will be need , kindly contact me . Your sincerely Rehab Idries
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to you regarding my lost identification
card
.
I missed my ID card
yesterday when I was coming on my way to the University, I noticed that it wasn't with me the moment I wanted to enter the University, I faced a real problem from
the gate , Change preposition
at
as well as
I had been forbidden from accessing the Library, I couldn't progress in my research. And not
only that , Correct word choice
Not
to
attend Correct word choice
but to
my
chemistry laboratory I had to bring Change the pronoun
the
a
permission from the dean, the problem Remove the article
apply
that
the permission I had was valid for only 48 hoursAdd a missing verb
is that
,
until I Remove the comma
apply
can
get my new identification Wrong verb form
could
card
.
As I need the card
in
every step in my college, most of my Business is hanging for now , I wouldn't be able to review some references or borrow them from the library, Change preposition
at
moreover
, I have to submit my final research within one week , as the deadline is about to due , every day has a great value to me . Other
problem , the missing laboratory classes are very hard to Correct quantifier usage
Another
be substituted
.
For all Wrong verb form
substitute
above
reasons ,I want to apply for Correct article usage
the above
new
Add an article
a new
the new
card
, hopefully, as soon as possible, in order to attend my classes and be able to finish my research in time , as you know the temporal permission would be expired by the end to
today , I'm wondering if any official form should be filled . I brought my passport as requested and two Change preposition
of
passport size
photos, if any Add a hyphen
passport-size
further
documents will be need
, kindly contact me .
Change the verb form
be needed
Correct the word
Yours
Your
sincerely
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Yours
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coherence cohesion
Try to organize your ideas more clearly by using paragraphs effectively. For example, one paragraph to describe the problem, another to explain how it affects you, and a final one for your request.
task achievement
Make sure to proofread your letter for minor grammatical errors and punctuation issues, which can enhance the clarity of your writing.
task achievement
You have a polite and formal writing tone, which is suitable for this type of letter.
coherence cohesion
You have included a greeting and a closing statement appropriately.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.