The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
It can be seen from the graph that the
enquiries
from different channels were received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. From the
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
the number received in
person
and by
telephone
increased,
while
the data of
enquiries
by
telephone
decreased from January to June. A deep analysis of the line graph provided the proportion of
enquiries
asked in
person
was at 400 in January. The figures for letters/email and
telephone
were higher, at under 800 and about 900 respectively. Both
enquiries
in
person
and by
telephone
increased significantly and reached the peak of 1900 and 1600,
while
the number by letter/ email fell slightly and remained stable at under 400. It can be concluded from the graph that the
enquiries
received in
person
were much higher at about five times compared with the number received by letter/email.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • number of inquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • six-month period
  • increased steadily
  • reached a peak
  • decreased slightly
  • increased dramatically
  • experienced a gradual decline
  • general trend
  • highest number
  • lowest number
  • significant increase
  • tourism interest
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