The diagram illustrates the number of shops in the situation of close and open in one country from 2011 to 2018.
The line graph gives a distribution of the figures of shopping centres in their non-working
hours
and operating states in a particular nation over the years
2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it is immediately apparent that,
the numbers for working Remove the comma
apply
hours
were lower compared to non-working hours
at the end
of the observation.
To begin
with, the number of opened and closed shops
in 2011 stood at 8,500 and nearly 6,500 respectively. However
, over the next 4 years
, the number of non-operating shops
saw fluctuations in it's
figures until there was a sharp decline to 500 in 2015. Meanwhile, the opened Replace the word
its
shops
observed a dramatic fall to a little less than half in
of the original functioning Change preposition
apply
hours
in 2012. In the next 3 years
, there was a steady rise to a little above 6,000 of the opened centres.
2015 to 2017 witnessed steady values for opened shops
which plunged to 3,000 by 2018. Closed shops
on
the other hand, made a shape rise reaching a little over 5,000 and remained steady in the subsequent Add the comma(s)
,on
years
until 2018.Submitted by nmaureen03 on
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