The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Aisian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with prediction for 2030 and 2040.

The diagrams

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the proportion of people who lived in large towns across various nations over the years 1970 to 2020 and a future extrapolation of what the situation will be like between 2030 to 2040.

Overall

, it is immediately apparent that all 4 countries observed increasing numbers of inhabitants.

To begin

with, the occupants in

Philippines

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,

Malaysia

,

Thailand

and Indonesia stood at just over 30%, at 30%, nearly 20% and a little below 15% respectively in the year 1970.

Also

,

Malaysia

and

Thailand

showed observed similar trends. Both nations saw a steady rise in the population numbers reaching twice their original figures

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2,000 at 60% for

Malaysia

and about 26% for Indonesia.

Similarly

, in the next 20

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the

citizens

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in the two societies continued to increase. The predicted population outcomes in these countries are estimated to record 85% in

Malaysia

and 60% in Indonesia. The

Phillipines

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Philippines

and

Thailand

noticed a gradual rise in the nationals to 50% and just about 30% respectively in 1990. Over the next 10 years, the number of folks in the Phillippians fell slowly to just over 40%.

On the other hand

,

Thailand

observed a steady population

upto

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up to

2020. An estimated figure for the populace in Phillippians is quoted at 50% and almost 50% for

Thailand

.