.Nowadays, people always throw old things and have new things. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effect does this phenomenon lead to?
In recent times, everyone
is
occupied Wrong verb form
has been
in
buying the updated Change preposition
with
version
while
removing the old
. An excellent example of Correct pronoun usage
oneold
this
phenomenon is the iPhone
by Apple. This
essay will aim to discuss the possible reasons
that causes
Apple Change the verb form
cause
customers
to constantly purchase the latest iPhones and what consequences their actions may lead to.
To begin
with, the primary reason why someone may purchase a newer iPhone
despite already possessing the previous version
is because of the newly added features in the latest version
. To illustrate, an iPhone
13 Pro will have a better and improved camera (among other things) than its predecessors. This
will clearly be an advantage for the picture-loving customers
that
make a career out of making vlogs or videos. Correct pronoun usage
who
Also
, sometimes it may be necessary to change the older phone model for reasons
of slower functions or damaged screen; these are genuine reasons
that enables
Apple Correct subject-verb agreement
enable
customers
to make that replacement.
However
, this
practice of easy replacements by the customers
are
not always genuine but concerning. Change the verb form
is
In particular
, the effects their actions bringsforth
in easily disposing the old for the new is grave. Correct your spelling
brings forth
bring forth
First,
they may be psychologically affected in making more materialistic decisions than usual. For instance
, iPhone
customers
will mostly not be satisfied in
using the older Change preposition
with
version
when there is an improved phone in town. It is only inevitable that they will be drawn to making the replacement for this
fact as opposed to anything else. In addition
to that, the poorer customers
may face financial consequences. Everyone gets attracted to the glamour and tries to fit into society with what is 'trending' at that time. When expensive becomes 'cool' then
there is a high risk for the less privileged to suffer financially as a result
of their poor decision-making in trying to look cool.
To conclude
, there are a
plenty of Remove the article
apply
reasons
that may influence someone to purchase the new iPhone
while
abandoning the old
. Correct pronoun usage
oneold
Although
,
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apply
this
may possibly lead to them having psychological as well as
financial aftermath, it won't be stopping them any time soon.Submitted by Mazam on
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