Some people think that environmental conservation is a global concern. Some others think that some countries do not need it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Protecting
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is considered as a spheral anxiety,
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others believe that it is useless for most domains. I personally think that environmental preservation should be
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concern. On the one hand, it is understandable for some to think that the government should take
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responsibility for the protection of the climate and preserve
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country’s
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the country’s
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environment
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. As a provincial, they should guide their citizens to live, work or socialize and raise awareness of environmental conservation, so protecting
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the environment
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is the responsibility of each nation.
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, if the
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fails to solve its own environmental problems, it will not set
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an example and lead the world to make an effort together to solve
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issue.
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, some citizens believe that every
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should preserve their own
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;
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, it is a problematic issue if it fails to address the issue.
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, it is more convincing for some that
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issues should be solved globally, and I agree. Undoubtedly, global complications can be dissolved quickly when all
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perform together. For one thing, in transnational cooperation, because the situation of each
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is different, what is harmful to the
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in
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country
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may be the key to solving environmental issues in another
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. International cooperation across borders can improve the global
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.
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, dissolving global problems rapidly is probable when all
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around the world work together. In conclusion, some consider that most
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do not need to the
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of
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the preservation of the
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,
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others believe that it is a global problem, so all
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should cooperate.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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