Some believe that living in populated
cities
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benefits. I agree with
this
idea, because living in big
cities
has better opportunities, and it
also
benefits
people
with its improved
health
-care
system
.
Firstly
, big
cities
give better chances to
people
. In my country, lots of
people
are moving into big
cities
for improved work and
education
system
. Rural areas do not include the
system
that the populated
cities
have; to have better living
people
should work in big
cities
.
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research conducted by Cambridge University, researchers imply that about 80
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of the UK
people
are from rural areas of the UK and the reason behind it is living issues.
On the other hand
, there is another reason to live in big
towns
. In recent days,
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is almost everything and to get
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education
it is a must to have it in populated
cities
. For one thing, my cousin lives in one of the distant regions of Azerbaijan and his school does not meet the requirements for
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good
education
system
.
That is
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of the city of Nakhchivan for modern private schools in order to get their son better
education
. Better work and
education
system
is enough for
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living,
thus
, there is another problem when comparing small
towns
with megapolises.
Furthermore
, there are experienced doctors living in populated
cities
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of
people
.
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, but, sadly, hospitals
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small
towns
cannot be compared to the hospitals
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big
towns
. The main issue with
that is
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system
is not enough for doctors to take care of their patients.
Instead
, in populated
cities
, hospitals have improvised
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, professional doctors, and modern technologies; with these, every
health
problem has its recovery.
For instance
,
according to
the research done by local universities, students found that the
overall
health
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of the small town
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is lower than the
overall
health
of the
people
of the populated city in
this
country.
Thus
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thing in our lives; to have
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life, it is a must to utilize the improvised
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system
.
To conclude
,
this
essay totally agrees that big
towns
are very advantageous in terms of opportunities and healthy life.