Some people think that it is more beneficial to live in a big city than a small city. What do you think about this statement?

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Some believe that living in populated
cities
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has a
lot
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benefits. I agree with
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idea, because living in big
cities
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has better opportunities, and it
also
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benefits
people
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with its improved
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health
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-care
system
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.
Firstly
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, big
cities
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give better chances to
people
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. In my country, lots of
people
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are moving into big
cities
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for improved work and
education
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system
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. Rural areas do not include the
system
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that the populated
cities
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have; to have better living
people
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should work in big
cities
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.
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research conducted by Cambridge University, researchers imply that about 80
percent
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of the UK
people
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are from rural areas of the UK and the reason behind it is living issues.
On the other hand
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, there is another reason to live in big
towns
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. In recent days,
education
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is almost everything and to get
good
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education
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it is a must to have it in populated
cities
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. For one thing, my cousin lives in one of the distant regions of Azerbaijan and his school does not meet the requirements for
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good
education
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system
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.
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why, his family wants to buy another property in the
center
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of the city of Nakhchivan for modern private schools in order to get their son better
education
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. Better work and
education
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system
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is enough for
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living,
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, there is another problem when comparing small
towns
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with megapolises.
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, there are experienced doctors living in populated
cities
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which is better for
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health
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the health
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of
people
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.
Health
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comes first when discussing
benefits
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the benefits
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of living in
megapolis
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a megapolis
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, but, sadly, hospitals
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the
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small
towns
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cannot be compared to the hospitals
of
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in
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the
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big
towns
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. The main issue with
that is
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health-care
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system
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is not enough for doctors to take care of their patients.
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, in populated
cities
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, hospitals have improvised
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health-care
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system
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systems
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, professional doctors, and modern technologies; with these, every
health
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problem has its recovery.
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,
according to
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the research done by local universities, students found that the
overall
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health
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of the
people
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of the small town
in
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particular
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country
,
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is lower than the
overall
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health
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of the
people
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of the populated city in
this
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country.
Thus
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,
health
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is
important
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an important
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thing in our lives; to have
healthy
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life, it is a must to utilize the improvised
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health-care
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healthcare
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system
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.
To conclude
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,
this
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essay totally agrees that big
towns
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are very advantageous in terms of opportunities and healthy life.

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