The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The given bar graph represents world
pineapple
exports by three leader
of the fruit producing countries from 2009 to 2019. Change to a plural noun
leaders
However
, the pie graph reveals distribution
of the cost to the consumer of Add an article
the distribution
single
Correct article usage
a single
pineapple
in 2019. Overall
, Country A produced the most significant tonnages of pineapple
exported throughout the period, and transportation for each pineapple
's expenditure more
than one-third of the total cost.
The three different countries Add a missing verb
was more
were leading
to Wrong verb form
led
production
of pineapples between 2009 and 2019. Add an article
the production
Moreover
, more than 4 million
tonnes
exported
from Country B in 2009, which was the highest Add a missing verb
were exported
compare
to its counterparts. It decreased to below 2 Wrong verb form
compared
million
tonnes
after a decade. On the other hand
, approximately 1 million
tonnes
of the fruit exported
from County A in 2009 before ascending Add a missing verb
was exported
over
10 Change preposition
to over
million
tonnes
in 2019. County C only contributed small
amount of the fruit which was slightly increased over time.
There were seven different items for Add an article
a small
total
expenditure of the cost to the consumer of a Correct article usage
the total
pineapple
in 2019. However
, the biggest proportion was transportation expenses around 35% which was almost double amount
of profit Correct article usage
the amount
with
18%. The remaining three important categories were export costs, import licences, and international transport with 16%, 10%, and 12% respectively. Other costs only took less than 10% which Change preposition
at
were
less than Correct subject-verb agreement
was
fee
of import licences.Add an article
the fee
a fee
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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