The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The given bar graph represents world
pineapple
exports by three
leader
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leaders
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of the fruit producing countries from 2009 to 2019.
However
, the pie graph reveals
distribution
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the distribution
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of the cost to the consumer of
single
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a single
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pineapple
in 2019.
Overall
, Country A produced the most significant tonnages of
pineapple
exported throughout the period, and transportation for each
pineapple
's expenditure
more
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was more
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than one-third of the total cost. The three different countries
were leading
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to
production
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the production
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of pineapples between 2009 and 2019.
Moreover
, more than 4
million
tonnes
exported
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were exported
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from Country B in 2009, which was the highest
compare
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compared
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to its counterparts. It decreased to below 2
million
tonnes
after a decade.
On the other hand
, approximately 1
million
tonnes
of the fruit
exported
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was exported
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from County A in 2009 before ascending
over
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to over
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10
million
tonnes
in 2019. County C only contributed
small
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a small
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amount of the fruit which was slightly increased over time. There were seven different items for
total
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the total
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expenditure of the cost to the consumer of a
pineapple
in 2019.
However
, the biggest proportion was transportation expenses around 35% which was almost double
amount
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the amount
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of profit
with
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at
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18%. The remaining three important categories were export costs, import licences, and international transport with 16%, 10%, and 12% respectively. Other costs only took less than 10% which
were
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less than
fee
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the fee
a fee
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of import licences.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • world pineapple exports
  • top three producing countries
  • 2009
  • 2019
  • breakdown
  • cost to the consumer
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
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