The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the process of

electricity

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for domestic purposes from using solar

panels

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this

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procedure consists of five main parts, namely: solar

panels

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, inverter, electrical panel, utility meter and service grid. Each part has its specific function to support the making of solar energy. In the first step, the solar

panels

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are fixed on the roof of the house where the most suitable place to receive direct sun rays.

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, sun rays are absorbed by the solar board and

this

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energy is transformed into the DC current at the same place.

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produced

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the produced

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current is directed to the converter

that is

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attached to the top corner of the house wall. Mainly, there are two functions of

this

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converter, it converts DC current into the AC current and controls the

electricity

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and production.

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the produced current is sent to the electrical panel established on the centre of the wall to parallel to the converter for distribution to

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the home

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home

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the home

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utility.

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, produce excess amount of solar energy, will be added to the grid through the utility meter.

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, when the usage amount of

electricity

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is higher than the

electricity

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production of solar

panels

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, the required amount of

electricity

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will provide the grid.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, panels with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

207 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

diagram
solar panels
electricity
domestic use
renewable energy
photovoltaic cells
sunlight
generate
store
inverter
power grid
environmentally friendly
efficient
cost-effective
sustainable
reliable
alternative
traditional
fossil fuels
nuclear energy
emissions
solar energy
advantages
disadvantages
reduces
dependency
conclusion

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The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?