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The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of
electricity
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 for domestic purposes from using solar
panels
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.
Overall
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,
this
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 procedure consists of five main parts, namely: solar
panels
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, inverter, electrical panel, utility meter and service grid. Each part has its specific function to support the making of solar energy. In the first step, the solar
panels
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 are fixed on the roof of the house where the most suitable place to receive direct sun rays.
Then
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, sun rays are absorbed by the solar board and
this
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 energy is transformed into the DC current at the same place.
Secondly
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,
produced
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the produced
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 current is directed to the converter
that is
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 attached to the top corner of the house wall. Mainly, there are two functions of
this
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 converter, it converts DC current into the AC current and controls the
electricity
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 and production.
Next,
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the produced current is sent to the electrical panel established on the centre of the wall to parallel to the converter for distribution to
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the home
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home
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the home
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 utility.
For instance
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, produce excess amount of solar energy, will be added to the grid through the utility meter.
On the other hand
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, when the usage amount of
electricity
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 is higher than the
electricity
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 production of solar
panels
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, the required amount of
electricity
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 will provide the grid.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, panels with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • solar panels
  • electricity
  • domestic use
  • renewable energy
  • photovoltaic cells
  • sunlight
  • generate
  • store
  • inverter
  • power grid
  • environmentally friendly
  • efficient
  • cost-effective
  • sustainable
  • reliable
  • alternative
  • traditional
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • emissions
  • solar energy
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • reduces
  • dependency
  • conclusion
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