You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: oapologize for what happened o explain why you missed the deadline o tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

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Dear Sir, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and in high spirits ! I am writing

this

letter to apologize for the

mihap

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mishap

mishaps

that

has

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happened

last

week. The client was very important

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us and I was not able to deliver the product on time. I

deepely

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deeply

regret the consequences that we have to face because of my negligence. Recently, my mother met with a ghastly accident. I had to admit her to the hospital and take leave for an extended period of time.

This

compelled me to stay by her side and take care of her health. Now you know the reason behind my actions was not an excuse , but a genuine reason.

Furthermore

, there was not a single

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resource to take care of my day-to-day activities.

Consequently

, I missed the deadline and the company had to face huge losses.

Additionally

, the project had very tight deadlines and the client was not willing to compromise on the delivery date, despite knowing my situation.

However

, I could have averted

this

situation by having a backup resource , who could take up my work in case of emergency. I will assure you that going forward I will keep a note of

this

point and make sure I deliver every project on time , despite the external situations. I once again apologize for my mistakes. Yours Sincerely, Shreyashi

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

233 words

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You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: oapologize for what happened o explain why you missed the deadline o tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In many countries, students' concentration in the classroom has decreased. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions?

Although nowadays many people have access to sports facilities, modern lifestyles are becoming less and less active. What problems are associated with this? How can people be persuaded to have a more active lifestyle?

Topic: In some countries, an increasing number of children are overweight or obese as a result of eating too much fast food. Banning fast food from school canteens is the best way to fight this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. do you think is a positive or a negative development?

In the modern world, many employees lack soft skill such as communication and working in the teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills ?