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The ease of international travel and the spred of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages?

#ease #travel #kinds #mass #media #world #people #countries #development #outweight
International
travel
 is developed
today
 more than ever before.
People
today
travel
in
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 different countries to go on a vacation, celebrate
honeymoon
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their honeymoon
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, or just simply go on weekend trips to see other
culture
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cultures
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 and lifestyles.
Furthermore
, someone who can't afford themselves
traveling
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travel
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in
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to
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other
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another country
other countries
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country
 can easily learn and see over
media
 culture of
people
of
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from
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 all around the world. Thanks to the
media
,
people
 can easily book a flight or apartment in
other
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another country
other countries
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country
. In just
few
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a few
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 clicks you can have all vacation planned out and just pack stuff and go.
Equally
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The equally
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 important thing that
Internet
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the Internet
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 and
media
 provide is meeting
people
 from foreign
Country
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Countries
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 to ask for advice where are best
specialties
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specialities
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 to try on and what one tourist must see in their
country
. On
contrary
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people
 before
media
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the media
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 usually went
on
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to
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 places that
are
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were
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 safe and recommended by
friend
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friends
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 or family. Places that are checked up and
where
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there
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 were no negative surprises. Because there
were
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was
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 no GPS,
people
 used paper maps and
travel
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travelled
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in
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to
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far
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a far
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country
 by night or early in the morning. They
were travelling
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travel
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 by car for eight to ten hours to reach
destination
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the destination
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 they put their mind
on
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to. With everything that has been said, I must agree that
today
people
 can easily see how other
people
 live in different countries and learn things about their culture that they couldn't before because of
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the availableility
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availableility
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availability
 of various kinds of
media
 and easiness of international
travel
. Booking a flight
today
 and organizing
vacation
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vacations
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 and trips
today
 are much
more
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easier, cheaper and faster than ever before.
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