Some people think that Zoo's are all cruel and should be closed down. Others, however believe that zoo can be useful in protecting wild animals. discuss both views and give your opinion.

people have

diffirent

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different

views about whether

zoo

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zoos

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are extremely important or useless.some people strongly believe that

above

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the above

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types

of settings are so

crusial

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crucial

however

others totally believe that

place

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places

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where

animals

live

this

places are useless and very harmful to living

animals

. Nowadays,many inhabitants create new

zoos

for earning money and viewers visit these kinds of

preceding

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places and give money for it and

also

,they give food and beverages to

animals

moreover

they take

foto

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photos

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with

animals

.On the other side of the coin,

this

situation

give

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has

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much more

badly

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bad

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affects

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effects

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further

more

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apply

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they lose

capacity

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the capacity

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of hunting

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to hunt

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what is more,they do not want make

relationship

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a relationship

the relationship

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with other male or

femele

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female

animals

.

this

situation

cause

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causes

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of decreasing rate of creatures that are living

in

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on

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the earth.

On the other hand

,if individuals establish various

types

of

zoos

for

animals

it

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they

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will be extremely good

place

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places

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for living

to

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apply

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animals

.

Secondly

,we can save extraordinary

animals

via

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by

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creating new places

which is

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that

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relates

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relate

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to living

animals

.

Additionally

,they always eat fresh and herbs foods

as a result

it gives much more energy for growing to

animals

.

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Thera

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are several opinions about

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question ,

for instance

,

this

situation

give

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gives

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much more income for both sides

such

as

,

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people and

animals

To sum up

,

zoos

are important

setting

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settings

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for all

types

of

animals

however

others completely believe that

zoos

are unnecessary

place

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places

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and very awful for

animals

.Arguably,l strongly believe that we ought to establish new

types

of setting

where

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that

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is related to

living

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the living

a living

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place

of

animals

.