The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The rendered map depicts the structural changes in the museum from 1998 to 2008.
After analyzing the data it can be clearly seen that
,
the garden Remove the comma
apply
area
had been reduced and cafe sitting area
and fountains were built . Whereas
,the restaurants were established in West-side cafe
which was not present in 1998. Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
Whereas
, toilets were also
relocated in 2008 from the east-south part of the museum to the east part of the cafe.The location of the temporary exhibition room was also
changed to adjacent to the garden in 2008.
Furthermore
, the area
of bags-coats and shoes was shifted from the lower right corner to the lower left corner of the museum. However
, the permanent exhibition room and ticket area
remained the same in 1998 and in 3008 respectively.
Overall
, the site has witnessed numerous changes and developments throughout the given period of time.Submitted by maneethans32 on
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