The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The rendered map depicts the structural changes in the museum from 1998 to 2008. After analyzing the data it can be clearly seen that

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the garden

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had been reduced and cafe sitting

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and fountains were built .

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,the restaurants were established in West-side

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which was not present in 1998.

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, toilets were

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relocated in 2008 from the east-south part of the museum to the east part of the cafe.The location of the temporary exhibition room was

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changed to adjacent to the garden in 2008.

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, the

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of bags-coats and shoes was shifted from the lower right corner to the lower left corner of the museum.

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, the permanent exhibition room and ticket

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remained the same in 1998 and in 3008 respectively.

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, the site has witnessed numerous changes and developments throughout the given period of time.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

rectangular shape
central garden area
symmetrically arranged
expanded galleries
visitor flow management
temporary exhibition space
permanent gallery
visitor facilities
customer service focus
dedicated children's area
expanded restroom facilities
museum gardens
unoccupied outdoor space
shift towards long-term exhibits

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