Modern children are suffering from diseases that were once considered only meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?
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this
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children
are suffering from diseases that used to be Use synonyms
adult’s
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adult
illness
. One of the most Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
diseases
is Correct word choice
common diseases
obesity
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that
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which
attack
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affects
children
. In Use synonyms
this
essay, I will explain more about the causes and the solutions Linking Words
about
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to
this
problem.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
children
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are
like to eat more Unnecessary verb
apply
ultra processed
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ultra-processed
foods
. It includes junk food that Use synonyms
have
been growing in recent years and Change the verb form
has
easy
to find. Most Add a missing verb
is easy
children
like to consume Use synonyms
ultra processed
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ultra-processed
foods
because of Use synonyms
its
taste and simplicity. The lack of knowledge about Correct pronoun usage
their
this
effect on Linking Words
health
issues Use synonyms
also
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make
them Change the verb form
makes
to
consume it daily. Change the verb form
apply
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
condition causes an unhealthy lifestyle and Linking Words
affect
their Correct subject-verb agreement
affects
health
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into
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to
obesity
. Use synonyms
For instance
, a survey by World Linking Words
Health
Organization shows that 65% Use synonyms
people
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of people
obesity
are caused by the consumption of Use synonyms
ultra processed
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ultra-processed
foods
.
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However
, there are several solutions we can adopt to prevent Linking Words
obesity
in Use synonyms
children
. First of all, parents should make rules about what their child consume Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
limitation
to Correct article usage
the limitation
eat
junk food or other Wrong verb form
eating
ultra processed
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ultra-processed
foods
. Parents can Use synonyms
also
educate their Linking Words
children
to eat healthy food and make Use synonyms
this
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as
habit Correct your spelling
a
to
their daily Change preposition
in
life
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lives
hence
it can lead to Linking Words
healthy
lifestyle. Add an article
a healthy
Furthermore
, Linking Words
by
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with
the
support from parents, Correct article usage
apply
children
will be happier
In conclusion, Use synonyms
health
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problem
especially Fix the agreement mistake
problems
obesity
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has
a big impact Wrong verb form
have had
in
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on
children
’s Use synonyms
life
recently Fix the agreement mistake
lives
or
even in the future. It’s not only affect Correct word choice
and
health
issues but Use synonyms
also
other aspects Linking Words
in
life. Change preposition
of
Nevertheless
, if people can take action to prevent Linking Words
this
problem, they still have Linking Words
chance
to reduce Correct article usage
a chance
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obesity
among Use synonyms
children
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