The pie chart below shows the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006 and 2016.
The chart
present
the number of speakers of 4 languages at Change the verb form
presents
Baskersfield
Senior College in 1980 and 1990.
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Bakersfield
Overall
, English has become the most used language than the others, although
Urdu has chased it, but still cannot compete with it
Firstly
, in 1980, other languages are
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were
to use
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used
mean
people in that place only Wrong verb form
meant
understand
English to have some conversations with each other.
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Secondly
, in 1990, English is still the majority of those 3 languages in that college even though it is decreased . However
, Urdu's
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Urdu is
also
still in number 2 but slowly it is increasing along with
time. Unlike Chinese and other
that have a little bit of changes.Fix the agreement mistake
others
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