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The air travel system only benefits the rich people in the world .To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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In the era of globalisation and modern technologies becoming more and more
air
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 travel ,
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, some
people
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 think that it is useful for only rich
humans
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.
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, I strongly agree with the statement that tickets are so expensive and available only for rich human beings. One strong argument in favour of the benefits is that cities might be much cleaner.
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, there will not be
air
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 pollution. Because, when
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 travels a lot, the covering film will deteriorate and tear.
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 the statistics of the
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 10 decades, the
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 was quite good, but nowadays it's 3 and a half times and it is worse.
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, continuing it might be bad for our future generation, because, the main thing in the life of
humans
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 is clean, healthy
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. There are several arguments in favour of drawbacks.
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,
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 is absolutely travelling, because, by travelling human beings will open their worldview.
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,
humans
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 who travel a lot know more information, it might be just language, tradition and so on. The research of Ilon Mask showed the difference between
people
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 who travelled and those who did not travel. So,
humans
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 who travelled had more specific and real feelings rather than the latter. The second reason is losing time by going by transport like trains, and cars.
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 means that rich
people
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 will not lose time on the road,
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, human beings with not enough money will spend approximately 10 times more than forma. It is obvious from the American website that the difference between a plane and a train is 10 times.
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, travelling by another transport is very difficult for poor
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, the government should look into that. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final, analysis we can say that using transport
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 as trains,cars and so on can lead to serious problems with time and comfortability.
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