Nowadays, gadgets
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been developed as much and there
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information in one. Just by touching
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our fingertips, the data about the things we want to know will appear on screen, but they are commented
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many
people
about their disadvantages. I will give my feedback in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with technologies at present, we always
use
smartphones
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. We
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time
for Change preposition
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using our smartphone
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our health.
For instance
, if our
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do not move, our
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will
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hurt and our
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broke
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Moreover
, using
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to watch blue light for
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time
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need to
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to buy some glasses for seeing.
Otherwise
,
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in real life
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worse because we always spend our time
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and forget to take care
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around
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.
Additionally
, when some bad
people
want to hack your data, they can make
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touch id
then
they can hack all of your personal information. It is hard to believe but some
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can not cope with
this
problem and they are in emergency situations. Some
people
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.
Therefore
, they should
use
it carefully and should not often
use
it in public.
In conclusion, technologies have logged in by finger taps and there are many
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devices. I can see a lot of disadvantages of them. So we can discuss that we can
use
it but we should be careful
while
using it. I want to recommend you to cope timetable for using them not much in one day.