The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people of one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart
present
to us the main ways of transportation for humans of one university for their job or study between 2004 and 2009.
Replace the word
presents
Overall
, the
all Correct article usage
apply
transports percentage
except Fix the agreement mistake
transport percentages
car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
were
increased even a bit.
As you can see the most noticeable changes have Unnecessary verb
apply
car
and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bus
. In 2009 people drivers decreased Fix the agreement mistake
buses
as
much as half, Change preposition
by as
meanwhile
men or women Add a comma
,meanwhile
which
travel by bus almost increased Correct pronoun usage
who
one third
of their first percentage.
As Add a hyphen
one-third
much
car users decreased as other transport users increased. Correct quantifier usage
apply
For instance
, bycicle
riders almost doubled in Correct your spelling
bicycle
subsequent
5 years. Or just walking and Correct article usage
the subsequent
train
Wrong verb form
training
also
rose two and one percent
respectively.
Getting back to all Change the spelling
per cent
mention
we can deduce that at least people living healthy life Wrong verb form
mentioned
according to
a climbed
Replace the word
climb
up
percentage of Change preposition
apply
bycicle
and walking.Correct your spelling
bicycle
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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