The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
Given are two maps illustrating how an
island
has been transformed after several tourist facilities were built.
Overall
, the
island
has been significantly changed after the construction of some man-made structures and a pier for boats to bring people to land, except on the east
side
of the
island
. The first map depicts that the
island
was undeveloped with only a few trees erected on the eastern and western sides.
However
, now there is a reception in the
center
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centre
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now, with vehicle tracks surrounding it and those tracks could
also
lead people to the restaurant and the pier, which is situated on the north and south
side
of the
island
respectively.
Furthermore
, on the left-hand
side
of the map, there are some accommodations around the trees, where people who
lived
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live
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can gain access to the beach to go swimming by walking on the footpath. There is
also
another ring of huts located on the east
side
of the
island
, connecting to each other by a path.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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