The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one coutry, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.

The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one coutry, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.
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country, by age and site of citizens, in 2016.
Overall
, in large
cities
, the vast majority of
middle aged
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people
used
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public
transport
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other places, the biggest number of
people
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public
transport
was accounted for by the youth.
Moreover
, the big
cities
' residents went by
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public vehicles more than the small
cities
' residents.
According to
the slope of large
cities
, the percentage of adolescents accounted for 40
percentage
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. At the same time half of
people
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from 16 to 30 old
traveled
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by public
transport
.
Then
, the individuals from 31 to 45 used
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public
transport
with the highest portion among all age groups (just above 65%).
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44% of all
middle aged
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people
used public
transport
. Only 10% of the oldest group of
people
travelled by public
transport
.
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