The graph shows the number the visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows the number the visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph illustrates the amount of visitors to six museums which are Louvre (France), Metropolitan
Museum
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(USA), British
Museum
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(UK), National
Museum
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of Korea, Museo del Prado (Spain), and State Hermitage (Russia) in 2011. The numbers are compared in millions. At first glance, it can be seen that the Louvre had the highest number of visitors
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State Hermitage had the lowest. The Louvre was represented at around 9 which made it the most visited
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in 2011. Below that
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, there was the Metropolitan
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and British
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which had similar figures. The Metropolitan
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had 6 and the British
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just below 6.
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there were 3 museums which were placed at the bottom three. The National
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of Korea had slightly above 3 which was half from the USA. Lower than that, there was Museo el Prado at 3, and State Hermitage at little less than 3 which represented one-third compared to the highest.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
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