the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram compares the weekly expenses of family members in a particular nation in 1968 and 2018 on various commodities.
Overall
it is immediately evident that Linking Words
food
was the commodity spent on the most in 2016 Use synonyms
whereas
leisure received a greater aspect of the funds in 2018.
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To begin
with, families spent more on Linking Words
food
, fuel and power, clothing and Use synonyms
footware
and personal goods in 1968. In 1968 whilst 35% of the weekly expenditure was channelled to Correct your spelling
footwear
food
, about half of Use synonyms
this
figure was spent on Linking Words
food
in 2018. Use synonyms
Similarly
, clothing and Linking Words
footware
and Correct your spelling
footwear
also
personal goods saw a decrease in funds used on Linking Words
these drop
to half their original amounts at 5% and about 4% respectively in 2018. Change the determiner
this drop
these drops
However
, fuel and power only experienced Linking Words
minimal
reduction of money allocated for its purchase by only 3%.
Turning to housing, leisure and transport, these areas received significant amounts on a weekly basis in 2018 compared to what was spent on them in 1968. Pleasurable activities jumped from just below 10% in 1968 to more than twice its original value in 2018. Add an article
a minimal
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Likewise
housing expenses Add a comma
,Likewise
reaching
nearly double Wrong verb form
reached
its
initial amount. Correct pronoun usage
their
By contrast
, there was no change in funds used on household goods in the different years.Linking Words
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